An I even missed words in my edit.. :-P On Tue, Apr 22, 2014 at 3:44 PM, C <smau...@opensuse.org> wrote: > Suggestions/edits in-line (small changes without altering the flavour > of the article) > > On Mon, Apr 21, 2014 at 9:06 PM, Manu Gupta <manugu...@gmail.com> wrote: >> Hey All, >> >> This is a small article, can you please review it >> >> "openSUSE welcome Google Summer of Code 2014 participants > > (spelling) welcomes > >> Thanks to Google, openSUSE has an excellent number of slots and an >> equally excellent number of mentors and students for Google Summer of >> Code 2014. Througuout the summer, students participanting in this > > (spelling) Throughout.... participating.... > >> program will code for openSUSE and its sister organizations ownCloud, >> MATE and Zorp and help them move forward. The best part of the >> projects is that the students most of the code written will go > > (missing words) The best part the project is that most of the code > written by the students will go upstream, which benefits openSUSE as > well.
The best part of the project is... >> upstream and will benefit openSUSE in general also. Along with this, >> we have an equally good range of projects that contribute to improve > > (word order) Along with these upstream projects, we have an equally > good range of projects that will improve the existing openSUSE > architecture. > >> the existing openSUSE architecture. >> >> The list of successfull students are : >> >> 1. Travel Support Program application - Karthik Senthil >> 2. Playlist Functionality for ownCloud Music App - Volkan >> 3. ownCloud Calendar Application in angularJS - Raghu Nayyar >> 4. openSUSE GSOC ideas: Cool live flash - Zsolt Peter Basak >> 5. Open Source Event Manager (OSEM): Refactor user management model - >> Stella Rouzi >> 6. Open Source Event Manager (OSEM): Implemention Organizer Dashboard >> - cbruckmayer >> 7. MATE: Port from deprecated GStreamer 0.10 - Michal Ratajsky >> 8. Integrate Snapper Snapshot browsing into openSUSE Desktop tools - >> Oguz Kayral >> 9. Implement an application-level LBaaS driver for Zorp - Péter Vörös >> 10. Extend Git-Review to support BitBucket - xystushi >> 11. Event Splash page for Visitors In Open Source Event Manager >> Application. - Gopesh Tulsyan >> 12. ePub support in Atril (MATE) - avishkar gupta >> 13. Add Snapshot management API to libvirt Xenlight driver - David Kiarie >> 14. Add a Snapshot Handling Framework to openSUSE GUI Tools - Varad Gautam >> >> In the following weeks weeks we will talk a lot more about these > > (spelling and wording) In the following weeks we will talk a lot > more about these projects and get to know the students as well. > >> projects and get to know these students well. >> >> Lets brew some code now. > > The article is fine :-) minor tweaks and it's done. > > C. > -- > openSUSE 13.1 x86_64, KDE 4.12 -- openSUSE 13.1 x86_64, KDE 4.12 -- To unsubscribe, e-mail: opensuse-marketing+unsubscr...@opensuse.org To contact the owner, e-mail: opensuse-marketing+ow...@opensuse.org
