Hi Joe, Thanks for your helpful review. Please see inline.
Regards, Bo 发件人: OPSAWG [mailto:opsawg-boun...@ietf.org] 代表 Joe Clarke (jclarke) 发送时间: 2022年3月8日 1:13 收件人: Joe Clarke (jclarke) <jclarke=40cisco....@dmarc.ietf.org>; opsawg@ietf.org 主题: Re: [OPSAWG] WG LC: A YANG Model for Network and VPN Service Performance Monitoring A few comments on -03. Section 4.1 Overall, this section seems like it could use more grounding to this work. It is a generic example of VPN layering. What would be a nice addition is to markup points where performance monitoring would be helpful to illustrate how this work comes into play. [Bo Wu] Thanks for the suggestion. How about adding the following text: Apart from the association between the VPN topology and the underlay topology, VPN Network PM can also provide the performance status of the underlay network and VPN services. For example, network PM can provide link PM statistics and port statistics. VPN PM can provides statistics on VPN access interfaces, the number of current VRF routes or L2VPN MAC entry of VPN nodes, and performance statistics on the logical point-to-point link between source and destination VPN nodes or between source and destination VPN access interfaces. In the YANG module, I'm curious about two things: First, why are inbound-discards a counter32 whereas outbound-discard a counter64? I think both should be 64-bit, yes? [Bo Wu] Yes. Thanks for catching this. We will fix. Second, the description on inbound-nunicast is different than outbound-nunicast with the latter being more descriptive. Can you do a pass to make sure these two sets of descriptions (inbound and outbond) align respective to their direction? [Bo Wu] Sure. We will fix. Thanks. Joe On 2/28/22 18:06, Joe Clarke (jclarke) wrote: Ahead of IETF 113, we'd like to get working group consensus on https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-yang-vpn-service-pm/. We are therefore conducting a two-week WG LC on this work. I have also requested reviews from Yang Docs, Ops, and Routing DIRs. Please share you comments and reviews on list. WG LC will end on March 14, 2022. Thanks. Joe _______________________________________________ OPSAWG mailing list OPSAWG@ietf.org<mailto:OPSAWG@ietf.org> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/opsawg
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