Hi authors, shepherd,
Thanks for quickly posting a new version of
draft-ietf-opsawg-yang-vpn-service-pm addressing the AD comments during the
IESG review.
The changes all look good to me, except that I question one of the changes that
were made (in response to one of Eric's comments I think):
augment /nw:networks/nw:network/nw:node:
+--rw node-type? identityref
+--ro entry-summary
+--ro ipv4-num
| +--ro maximum-routes? uint32
| +--ro total-active-routes? uint32
+--ro ipv6-num
| +--ro maximum-routes? uint32
| +--ro total-active-routes? uint32
+--ro mac-num
+--ro mac-limit-number? uint32
+--ro total-active-mac-num? uint32
mac-num-limit has been changed from mac-num-limit to max-limit-number, but I
was wondering whether you considered trying to make the names for the mac entry
limits more consistent with the names of the IP route limits. E.g.,
augment /nw:networks/nw:network/nw:node:
+--rw node-type? identityref
+--ro entry-summary
+--ro ipv4-num
| +--ro maximum-routes? uint32
| +--ro total-active-routes? uint32
+--ro ipv6-num
| +--ro maximum-routes? uint32
| +--ro total-active-routes? uint32
+--ro mac-num
+--ro maximum-mac-entries? uint32
+--ro total-active-mac-entries? uint32
This is a just a suggestion. Please let me know if you wish to make this
change and post an updated draft, or whether you would like me to proceed with
approving the -14 version.
Regards,
Rob
> -----Original Message-----
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> To: adr...@olddog.co.uk; Rob Wilton (rwilton) <rwil...@cisco.com>
> Subject: New Version Notification - draft-ietf-opsawg-yang-vpn-service-pm-
> 14.txt
>
>
> A new version (-14) has been submitted for draft-ietf-opsawg-yang-vpn-
> service-pm:
> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-opsawg-yang-vpn-service-pm-14.txt
>
> Sub state has been changed to AD Followup from Revised ID Needed
>
>
> The IETF datatracker page for this Internet-Draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-yang-vpn-service-pm/
>
> Diff from previous version:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-opsawg-yang-vpn-service-pm-14
>
> IETF Secretariat.
>
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