Hi Bo,

I think that “limit-number” name makes more sense in the context of the other 
peer leaves around it when it is defined under “mac-addr-limit”, i.e., the 
“time-interval”, and what action is being taken.

My “no hats” opinion is that I would still go for consistency with the other 
counters under entry-summary.  E.g., using the same naming convention between 
the “maximum” and the “active”, and between v4, v6 and mac addresses.  If it 
helps you could also make the relationship to mac-policies/limit-number clear 
as part of the description.

But I’ll leave this entirely as the authors decision, this is just a minor 
non-blocking comment.

Regards,
Rob


From: Wubo (lana) <lana.w...@huawei.com>
Sent: 21 October 2022 10:41
To: Rob Wilton (rwilton) <rwil...@cisco.com>; 
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Cc: adr...@olddog.co.uk; opsawg@ietf.org
Subject: RE: New Version Notification - 
draft-ietf-opsawg-yang-vpn-service-pm-14.txt


Hi Rob,



Thanks for the review and suggestion.



Per the naming of "mac-limit-number", we are considering to be consistent with 
L2NM definition:



https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc9291:

              |     +--rw mac-policies

              |     |  +--rw mac-addr-limit

              |     |  |  +--rw limit-number?    uint16

              |     |  |  +--rw time-interval?   uint32

              |     |  |  +--rw action?          Identityref



Do you think this makes sense?



Thanks,

Bo



-----Original Message-----
From: Rob Wilton (rwilton) [mailto:rwil...@cisco.com]
Sent: Friday, October 21, 2022 5:31 PM
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Cc: adr...@olddog.co.uk<mailto:adr...@olddog.co.uk>; 
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Subject: RE: New Version Notification - 
draft-ietf-opsawg-yang-vpn-service-pm-14.txt



Hi authors, shepherd,



Thanks for quickly posting a new version of 
draft-ietf-opsawg-yang-vpn-service-pm addressing the AD comments during the 
IESG review.



The changes all look good to me, except that I question one of the changes that 
were made (in response to one of Eric's comments I think):



     augment /nw:networks/nw:network/nw:node:

       +--rw node-type?       identityref

       +--ro entry-summary

          +--ro ipv4-num

          |  +--ro maximum-routes?        uint32

          |  +--ro total-active-routes?   uint32

          +--ro ipv6-num

          |  +--ro maximum-routes?        uint32

          |  +--ro total-active-routes?   uint32

          +--ro mac-num

             +--ro mac-limit-number?       uint32

             +--ro total-active-mac-num?   uint32



mac-num-limit has been changed from mac-num-limit to max-limit-number, but I 
was wondering whether you considered trying to make the names for the mac entry 
limits more consistent with the names of the IP route limits.  E.g.,



     augment /nw:networks/nw:network/nw:node:

       +--rw node-type?       identityref

       +--ro entry-summary

          +--ro ipv4-num

          |  +--ro maximum-routes?        uint32

          |  +--ro total-active-routes?   uint32

          +--ro ipv6-num

          |  +--ro maximum-routes?        uint32

          |  +--ro total-active-routes?   uint32

          +--ro mac-num

             +--ro maximum-mac-entries?       uint32

             +--ro total-active-mac-entries?   uint32



This is a just a suggestion.  Please let me know if you wish to make this 
change and post an updated draft, or whether you would like me to proceed with 
approving the -14 version.



Regards,

Rob





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> Subject: New Version Notification - draft-ietf-opsawg-yang-vpn-service-pm-

> 14.txt

>

>

> A new version (-14) has been submitted for draft-ietf-opsawg-yang-vpn-

> service-pm:

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>

> Sub state has been changed to AD Followup from Revised ID Needed

>

>

> The IETF datatracker page for this Internet-Draft is:

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> Diff from previous version:

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> IETF Secretariat.

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