It may help to point out that the MIB module is mostly unchanged,
nothing in the design or structure of the MIB module did change
as far as I know.

/js

On Tue, Feb 28, 2023 at 02:39:47PM +0000, Joe Clarke (jclarke) wrote:
> Thanks for the review, Eric (and Lars).
> 
> There was no formal MIB Doctor review, but we did receive comments from 
> Jürgen and Randy, who are members of MIB Doctors (I believe), during the 
> progress of this draft.  Those comments were helpful in deciding on the 
> language changes within the MIB object descriptions, as well as fixing some 
> syntax errors.
> 
> https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/search/?q=tlstm&f_list=opsawg&f_from=J%C3%BCrgen%20Sch%C3%B6nw%C3%A4lder
> 
> https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/search/?q=tlstm&f_list=opsawg&f_from=Randy%20Presuhn
> 
> I know they weren’t reviewing in the formal MIB Doctors sense.  If the IESG 
> feels a more formal MIB Doctor review is needed, we can ask for it.
> 
> Joe
> 
> From: Éric Vyncke via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org>
> Date: Tuesday, February 28, 2023 at 08:32
> To: The IESG <i...@ietf.org>
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> Subject: Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-12: 
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> 
> # Éric Vyncke, INT AD, comments for draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-12
> CC @evyncke
> 
> Thank you for the work put into this document.
> 
> Please find below some non-blocking COMMENT points.
> 
> Special thanks to Joe Clarke for the shepherd's detailed write-up including 
> the
> WG consensus **and** the justification of the intended status.
> 
> I hope that this review helps to improve the document,
> 
> Regards,
> 
> -éric
> 
> ## COMMENTS
> 
> ### MIB Doctor review
> 
> Like Lars, I wonder whether there was a MIB doctor review.
> 
> ### Section 3.1
> 
> This text is repeated, is it on purpose ?
> ```
> The reason 0-RTT is disallowed is that there are no "safe" messages that if
> replayed will be guaranteed to cause no harm at a server side: all incoming
> notification or command responses are meant to be acted upon only once. See
> Security considerations section for further details ```
> 
> ## Notes
> 
> This review is in the ["IETF Comments" Markdown format][ICMF], You can use the
> [`ietf-comments` tool][ICT] to automatically convert this review into
> individual GitHub issues.
> 
> [ICMF]: https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments/blob/main/format.md
> [ICT]: https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments
> 
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