Thanks Med, that looks great.
David, I approve the -10.
P.
On 22/05/24 07:42, mohamed.boucad...@orange.com wrote:
Hi Paul,
-10 fixes all these, including the ToC level.
Thank you.
Cheers,
Med
*De :* Aitken, Paul <pait...@ciena.com>
*Envoyé :* mardi 21 mai 2024 22:58
*À :* BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET <mohamed.boucad...@orange.com>;
drafts-expert-review-comm...@iana.org
*Cc :* ie-doct...@ietf.org; opsawg <opsawg@ietf.org>
*Objet :* Re: [Ie-doctors] [IANA #1363822] Expert review for
draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-fixes (ipfix)
Med,
* In the TOC, all the OLD / NEW section names are distracting. It
would be much more readable if the TOC was limited to just two levels:
1. Introduction . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 4
2. Conventions and Definitions . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 5
3. Why An RFC is Needed for These Updates? . . . . . . . . . . . 6
4. Update the Description . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 6
4.1. sourceTransportPort . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 6
4.2. destinationTransportPort . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 7
4.3. forwardingStatus . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 8
Is this not possible?
* 6.11.2 NEW
Please append [RFC5102 [iana.org]
<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.iana.org/go/rfc5102__;!!OSsGDw!JNH0CYLK4vjkABu-cFwUmkIE5CBNlemiA4NBseRFoWxSRTTB9y5yUwj2nT9VV_EvrAwtuqT3ANY2CkyFV-zmjrvn$>]
here.
For the methods parameters, Information Elements are defined
in the information model document *[RFC5102]*.
*/[Med] OK as that was the intent at the time. However, given that
5102 is obsoleted, should we simply point to the registry itself
instead of 5102?/*
Yes please, that seems good.
6.22.2. NEW
Typo: remove "at" in the registry name:
SeemibCaptureTimeSemanticsat registry at
P.
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