Hi Alvaro,

Thanks for your review.
Just one comment has not been discussed so far.


(5) Scope creep?

   §1.2 (Audience) mentions several potential uses of this document beyond
   documenting the operational and manageability considerations for New
   Protocols or Protocol Extensions, for example: "Area Director who is in the
   process of creating a new WG Charter...OPS Directorate can use this
   document to guide performing reviews".  But there is no guidance on how ADs    should use the document when chartering.  A reference is provided to the    OPS Dir checklist.  IMO, both potential uses should be outside the scope of
   the document.

   [May be related to https://github.com/IETF-OPSAWG-WG/draft-opsarea-rfc5706bis/issues/65]

Regarding "But there is no guidance on how ADs should use the document when chartering", I understand that the following text is a little bit light:

   As an Area Director who is in the process of creating a new WG
   Charter, this document lists some considerations of the
   functionality needed to operate and manage New Protocols and
   Protocol Extensions.

As previous OPS AD, I was convinced of the importance of addressing the manageability and operational aspects early in the process (to state the obvious). A DISCUSS, at the very last step in the process, has never been an ideal tool to send the WG back to the drawing board. This sentence above, which I wrote, wanted to stress that this RFC /can /be used as input at charter creation time, with a list of "OPS things" that the new WG & IESG in the end might be thinking about when approving the charter text.

Before updating the text, do we agree about the intended goal?

Regards, Benoit
_______________________________________________
OPSAWG mailing list -- [email protected]
To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]

Reply via email to