On 26/01/2026 10:57, Tal Mizrahi wrote:
Hi Gorry,
Thanks for the comments.
An updated version has been posted:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-oam-characterization/16
Please see my comments inline, marked [TM].
On Mon, Jan 12, 2026 at 5:15 PM Gorry Fairhurst via Datatracker
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draft-ietf-opsawg-oam-characterization-15: No Objection
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This was a clear document and it seems to provide a useful set of defintions.
I have the following (non-blocking) comments:
1. Abstract
The present abstract reads more like a problem statememt for the work, than a
summary of the key things being standardised. I suggest this current text still
may be useful intoroduction, but the abstract could more be usefully based on
the text in the first para of section 3.1.
[TM] The abstract has been revised in this version, and generally
speaking has undergone several iterations to make sure that this draft
'does what it says on the box'. Therefore, at this point we would
prefer not to make further significant changes in the abstract.
2. Section 3.5?
Would it be helpful for the words "equal forwarding treatment" be replaced by
the defined term "Equal-Forwarding-Treatment" for more consistency?
[TM] Good catch. Fixed.
Best wishes, Gorry
Cheers,
Tal.
Thanks for your consideration,
Gorry
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