Hi,
some comments:
last sentence of section 1:
capablity -> capability
applicalbe -> applicable
Section 3:
The Encapsulation Capability TLV could not appear more than once wihin a
given OSPF Router Information (RI) Opaque LSA .
Would like to change it to SHOULD NOT or better MUST NOT instead of
could not and at the end of the sentence is a space which should be removed.
Encapsualtion -> Encapsulation
Cability -> Capability
vairalbe-> variable
Section 4:
.. -> . at the end of the sentence
Regards
Karsten
Am 03.03.2015 um 03:13 schrieb Xuxiaohu:
Hi all,
Any comments are welcome.
Best regards,
Xiaohu
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Name: draft-xu-ospf-encapsulation-cap
Revision: 00
Title: Advertising Encapsulation Capability Using OSPF
Document date: 2015-02-28
Group: Individual Submission
Pages: 5
URL:
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-xu-ospf-encapsulation-cap-00.txt
Status:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-xu-ospf-encapsulation-cap/
Htmlized: http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-xu-ospf-encapsulation-cap-00
Abstract:
In a particular network environment where MPLS-SPRING-enabled routers
are partially deployed, it needs to transport MPLS traffic through an
IP-based tunnel between two MPLS-SPRING-enabled routers so as to
traverse non-MPLS routers. The ingress of the IP-based tunnel must
know which encapsulation type is supported by the egress of that IP-
based tunnel.This document describes how to advertise the
encapsulation capability of MPLS-SPRING-enabled routers using OSPF.
Note that this encapsulation capablity advertisment may be applicalbe
to other use cases as well.
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