Hi Karsten, Thanks a lot for your comments. I will update them in the next version.
Best regards, Xiaohu > -----Original Message----- > From: Karsten Thomann [mailto:[email protected]] > Sent: Tuesday, March 03, 2015 2:58 PM > To: Xuxiaohu; [email protected] > Subject: Re: [OSPF] FW: New Version Notification for > draft-xu-ospf-encapsulation-cap-00.txt > > Hi, > > some comments: > last sentence of section 1: > capablity -> capability > applicalbe -> applicable > Section 3: > The Encapsulation Capability TLV could not appear more than once wihin a given > OSPF Router Information (RI) Opaque LSA . > Would like to change it to SHOULD NOT or better MUST NOT instead of could not > and at the end of the sentence is a space which should be removed. > > Encapsualtion -> Encapsulation > Cability -> Capability > vairalbe-> variable > > Section 4: > .. -> . at the end of the sentence > > Regards > Karsten > > > Am 03.03.2015 um 03:13 schrieb Xuxiaohu: > > Hi all, > > > > Any comments are welcome. > > > > Best regards, > > Xiaohu > > > >> -----Original Message----- > >> From: [email protected] [mailto:[email protected]] > >> Sent: Saturday, February 28, 2015 4:21 PM > >> To: Uma Chunduri; Luis M. Contreras; Robert Raszuk; Xuxiaohu; Luis M. > >> Contreras; Xuxiaohu; Uma Chunduri; Robert Raszuk > >> Subject: New Version Notification for > >> draft-xu-ospf-encapsulation-cap-00.txt > >> > >> > >> A new version of I-D, draft-xu-ospf-encapsulation-cap-00.txt > >> has been successfully submitted by Xiaohu Xu and posted to the IETF > repository. > >> > >> Name: draft-xu-ospf-encapsulation-cap > >> Revision: 00 > >> Title: Advertising Encapsulation Capability Using OSPF > >> Document date: 2015-02-28 > >> Group: Individual Submission > >> Pages: 5 > >> URL: > >> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-xu-ospf-encapsulation-cap-0 > >> 0.txt > >> Status: > >> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-xu-ospf-encapsulation-cap/ > >> Htmlized: > http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-xu-ospf-encapsulation-cap-00 > >> > >> > >> Abstract: > >> In a particular network environment where MPLS-SPRING-enabled > routers > >> are partially deployed, it needs to transport MPLS traffic through an > >> IP-based tunnel between two MPLS-SPRING-enabled routers so as to > >> traverse non-MPLS routers. The ingress of the IP-based tunnel must > >> know which encapsulation type is supported by the egress of that IP- > >> based tunnel.This document describes how to advertise the > >> encapsulation capability of MPLS-SPRING-enabled routers using OSPF. > >> Note that this encapsulation capablity advertisment may be applicalbe > >> to other use cases as well. > >> > >> > >> > >> > >> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of > >> submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at > >> tools.ietf.org. > >> > >> The IETF Secretariat > > _______________________________________________ > > OSPF mailing list > > [email protected] > > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ospf _______________________________________________ OSPF mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ospf
