Hi Eric, Introduction section does have a brief description and refers to 7.1 for detailed description of the use case. Moving detailed use case description to introduction section will make it cluttered. Also there are other applications apart from 7.1 which also have a brief description in the Introduction and refer to application section for detailed description.
Rgds Shraddha -----Original Message----- From: Eric Rescorla [mailto:e...@rtfm.com] Sent: Thursday, January 18, 2018 10:11 PM To: The IESG <i...@ietf.org> Cc: draft-ietf-ospf-link-overl...@ietf.org; Acee Lindem <a...@cisco.com>; ospf-cha...@ietf.org; a...@cisco.com; ospf@ietf.org Subject: Eric Rescorla's No Objection on draft-ietf-ospf-link-overload-12: (with COMMENT) Eric Rescorla has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-ospf-link-overload-12: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.ietf.org_iesg_statement_discuss-2Dcriteria.html&d=DwICaQ&c=HAkYuh63rsuhr6Scbfh0UjBXeMK-ndb3voDTXcWzoCI&r=NyjLsr7JA7mvpCJa0YmPdVKcmMXJ31bpbBaNqzCNrng&m=3MyT2IBHmmEmtejJI2o73p3zIjhzSmGtffDprR-DdD0&s=TufjwL4DRLGVAWd56qU-6DaDDRfPsgeHp8JmN2XrdTE&e= for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__datatracker.ietf.org_doc_draft-2Dietf-2Dospf-2Dlink-2Doverload_&d=DwICaQ&c=HAkYuh63rsuhr6Scbfh0UjBXeMK-ndb3voDTXcWzoCI&r=NyjLsr7JA7mvpCJa0YmPdVKcmMXJ31bpbBaNqzCNrng&m=3MyT2IBHmmEmtejJI2o73p3zIjhzSmGtffDprR-DdD0&s=avFGB5zEal090OxCbLLU5A1NvjlOJREQPCY-yP7GTDk&e= ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- I think this document would be clearer if the example in S 7.1 were in the intro. I was scratching my head a bit at the beginning and then got to 7.1 and it made more sense. _______________________________________________ OSPF mailing list OSPF@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ospf
