On Fri, Oct 06, 2006 at 04:27:03PM +0200, Mark Townsley wrote: (snip) > > > >So, I'd rewrite this paragraph as: > > > > There are components that are part of a complete secure network > > access solution but are outside of the PANA protocol specification, > > including IP address configuration, authentication method choice, > > data traffic protection, PAA-EP protocol, and PAA discovery. PANA > > authentication output is used for creating access control filters. But > > creation of fine-granularity filters and their installation on > > the enforcement elements are outside the scope as well. > > > OK, in the first part you have simply removed "filter rule > installation"- I agree that helps. I don't think you need the extra > sentence at the end though. Read without context of this discussion, it > raises more questions than answers (what does "fine-granularity" mean, > for example; a single filter on a single IP hostroute sounds pretty > "granular" to me!).
I agree with removing the last sentence as Mark suggested. Yoshihiro Ohba _______________________________________________ Pana mailing list [email protected] https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pana
