> > >So, I'd rewrite this paragraph as: > > > > > > There are components that are part of a complete secure network > > > access solution but are outside of the PANA protocol specification, > > > including IP address configuration, authentication method choice, > > > data traffic protection, PAA-EP protocol, and PAA discovery. PANA > > > authentication output is used for creating access control filters. > But > > > creation of fine-granularity filters and their installation on > > > the enforcement elements are outside the scope as well. > > > > > OK, in the first part you have simply removed "filter rule > > installation"- I agree that helps. I don't think you need the extra > > sentence at the end though. Read without context of this discussion, it > > raises more questions than answers (what does "fine-granularity" mean, > > for example; a single filter on a single IP hostroute sounds pretty > > "granular" to me!). > > I agree with removing the last sentence as Mark suggested.
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