Hi,

A few more issues we can check:

a. In Sec 5.5, the following text:

"
+ The last PANA-Auth-Request as well as ping request before
 completion of the initial PANA-Auth-Request and
 PANA-Auth-Answer exchange.
"

should be replace with:

"
+ The last PANA-Auth-Request before completion of the initial
 PANA-Auth-Request and PANA-Auth-Answer exchange.

+ Ping request.
"

Reasons: We should not allow ping during authentication and authorization phase and re-authentication phase since it will allow for multiple outstanding requests to be sent (ping and auth request) which tends to complicate state transitions. Also, we don't need liveness test during these phases anyway since we already rely on session lifetime to detect failed sessions.

b. In Sec 5.5:

"
     *  In the access phase:

        +  PANA-Auth-Request.
"

Just for clarity, maybe it should be "+  PANA-Auth-Request with any of its bit flag 
set".

c. Optional text we want to consider for the same complexity reason as (a) 
above.

-- Sec 4.2.; First paragraph; Add a sentence: "The ping request MUST be sent only 
when there are no other pending un-answered request".
-- Same with sec 4.3 and 4.4 with regards to re-auth and termination request. Not 
sure how to phrase it though. Maybe "A PANA session MUST not enter the
  [re-auth|termination] phase while there are pending un-answered request" (??).

regards,
victor




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