On 1/25/2013 9:51 AM, Anthony Mancuso wrote:
3.1 "A complete protocol solution must enable all potential white
space services." That seems a bit absolute. How about "must enable
many different potential white space services"?
I'd strike the entire sentence. There is no such thing as a "complete
protocol". If you must have it, change it to "this protocol" and it
isn't wrong (but still not adding information).
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