Don, Thanks for the careful read!
Gabor, should I upload a new version with the fixes? -vince On Thu, Jan 16, 2014 at 10:52 AM, Don Joslyn <[email protected]>wrote: > The new version looks good to me. > Please find feedback attached, just some minor nits. > > Regards, > Don > > > -----Original Message----- > From: [email protected] [[email protected]] > Received: Tuesday, 14 Jan 2014, 3:10pm > To: [email protected] [[email protected]]; [email protected] [[email protected]] > Subject: Re: [paws] I-D Action: draft-ietf-paws-protocol-08.txt > > Good, thanks Vince. > > This draft incorporates the agreeable comments received during the second > wglc. > > I’d like to ask people on the list to please review the set of changes the > editor implemented and let the list know if you have any comments. > > If no comments received, I think the wg is done with the document and it > is ready to be forwarded to the IESG. I plan to do that next week, so if > you have > comments to the draft then please send those to the list during this week. > > > > Gabor > > > > From: paws [mailto:[email protected]] > On Behalf Of ext Vincent Chen > > Sent: Tuesday, January 14, 2014 9:52 AM > > To: [email protected] > > Subject: Re: [paws] I-D Action: draft-ietf-paws-protocol-08.txt > > > > > > Gabor, All, > > > > > > > > > I've uploaded a new version of the draft incorporating the proposed > changes: > > > > > > > > > > > > o Propose ruleset ID name for ETSI: ETSI-EN-301-598-1.0.0-draft > > > > > > o Change TBD email address to > [email protected] for proposing > > > > > changes to the PAWS IANA registries > > > > > o Moved discussion of required vCard properties to regulatory-specific > sections > > > > > > o Fixed vCard examples for organization names: Use "fn" property, but set > "kind" to "org". > > > > > > o Shorten parameter names: > > > > > * freqHz -> hz > > > > > * powerDbmPerBw -> dbm > > > > > > > > > > Diff: > http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-ietf-paws-protocol-07&url2=draft-ietf-paws-protocol-08 > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > -vince > > > > > > > > > > On Tue, Jan 14, 2014 at 9:48 AM, <[email protected]> wrote: > > > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > directories. > > This draft is a work item of the Protocol to Access WS database Working > Group of the IETF. > > > > Title : Protocol to Access White-Space (PAWS) Databases > > Authors : Vincent Chen > > Subir Das > > Lei Zhu > > John Malyar > > Peter J. McCann > > Filename : draft-ietf-paws-protocol-08.txt > > Pages : 104 > > Date : 2014-01-14 > > > > Abstract: > > Portions of the radio spectrum that are allocated to licensees are > > available for non-interfering use. This available spectrum is called > > "White Space." Allowing secondary users access to available spectrum > > "unlocks" existing spectrum to maximize its utilization and to > > provide opportunities for innovation, resulting in greater overall > > spectrum utilization. > > > > One approach to manage spectrum sharing uses databases to report > > spectrum availability to devices. To achieve interoperability among > > multiple devices and databases, a standardized protocol must be > > defined and implemented. This document defines such a protocol, the > > "Protocol to Access White Space (PAWS) Databases". > > > > > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-paws-protocol/ > > > > There's also a htmlized version available at: > > http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-paws-protocol-08 > > > > A diff from the previous version is available at: > > http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-paws-protocol-08 > > > > > > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of > submission > > until the htmlized version and diff are available at > tools.ietf.org. > > > > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: > > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ > > > > _______________________________________________ > > paws mailing list > > [email protected] > > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/paws > > > > > > > > > > > > > > -- > > -vince > > Sent from my Android phone using TouchDown (www.nitrodesk.com) > -- -vince
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