All,
I've uploaded a new draft of PAWS that I believe addresses all the points
raised by
the ADs, Gen-ART, and at the F2F.
The major change is the simplification of Section 6 for JSON encoding,
reducing it to a number of examples.
Summary of changes:
o Define primitive types in Section 4, specifying UTF-8 for strings
and remove UTF-8 references elsewhere.
o Replace or rephrase "parameter" when reference is to higher-level
structure.
o Replace "MUST" with non-2119 language (maximum length is xxx
octets.
o Rephrase statements that reflected regulatory, not PAWS
requirements (e.g., deletion of "MUST" or "MAY" and rephrasing as
a regulatory requirement).
o Replace "Paws protocol (redundant) to "PAWS"
o Change "geo-location" to "geolocation"
o General references to "Database" changed to "database."
o Simplify Section 6 by showing several JSON encoding examples.
o Change "Device" to "device"
o Moved treatment of List Server as discovery mechanism to
Appendix and added JSON-encoded DB List Server response example.
Diff: http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-paws-protocol-13
Please take a look and comment. Thanks!
--
-vince
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