Hi, Thanks for this revision which is practically perfect.
Sadly, the RFC Editor requires that the first section of a document is the Introduction. I think it would be fine to swap your sections 1 and 2. You asked me at the end of February to have a look at your proposed Security text, and I have done now. I think you have gone a long way towards doing the right thing, and I'm comfortable with the idea of putting this in front of the Security experts. You need to post a quick update to swap the first two sections. While you do that I'll write the Shepherd Write-up. Then we will ask the AD to advance it. Thanks, Adrian -----Original Message----- From: Dhruv Dhody <dhruv.dh...@huawei.com> Sent: 07 March 2019 09:36 To: adr...@olddog.co.uk; pce@ietf.org Cc: Dhruv Dhody <dhruv.i...@gmail.com> Subject: RE: [Pce] WG Last Call completed for draft-ietf-pce-applicability-actn Hi Adrian, WG, We have posted a new version -09 that addresses WG LC comments (from Adrian and Dan). I-D: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pce-applicability-actn/ Diff: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-pce-applicability-actn-09 Please have a look and let us know if any further changes needs to be made. Thanks! Dhruv, Young & Daniele -- Dhruv Dhody Lead Architect Network Business Line Huawei Technologies India Pvt. Ltd. Survey No. 37, Next to EPIP Area, Kundalahalli, Whitefield Bengaluru, Karnataka - 560066 Tel: + 91-80-49160700 Ext 71583 II Email: dhruv.dh...@huawei.com This e-mail and its attachments contain confidential information from HUAWEI, which is intended only for the person or entity whose address is listed above. Any use of the information contained herein in any way (including, but not limited to, total or partial disclosure, reproduction, or dissemination) by persons other than the intended recipient(s) is prohibited. If you receive this e-mail in error, please notify the sender by phone or email immediately and delete it! > -----Original Message----- > From: Pce [mailto:pce-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Adrian Farrel > Sent: 25 February 2019 18:24 > To: pce@ietf.org > Subject: [Pce] WG Last Call completed for draft-ietf-pce-applicability- > actn > > Hi, > > The WG last call completed without any dissent, but with only a few > comments of support. > > There were some issues raised (including from Dan and me). > > Authors: > Please post a revision that addresses the comments. > > Working Group: > Please continue to send messages of support so that we know that this > draft really should be advanced. > > Thanks, > Adrian > > -----Original Message----- > From: Pce <pce-boun...@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Adrian Farrel > Sent: 08 February 2019 11:34 > To: pce@ietf.org > Subject: [Pce] WG Last Call on draft-ietf-pce-applicability-actn > > Hi WG, > > draft-ietf-pce-applicability-actn seems to be ready to progress towards > publication. > > This email starts a two week working group last call (ends on 23rd > February). > > During this time, please read the draft and make comments for improvement. > If you then support its publication please let us know that you have read > the draft and support it. If you have any concerns, please let us know and > propose solutions. > > Thanks, > Adrian > > _______________________________________________ > Pce mailing list > Pce@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce > > _______________________________________________ > Pce mailing list > Pce@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce _______________________________________________ Pce mailing list Pce@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce
