Hi All, 

 

/Support

 

I'm a believer in the work. For some scenarios that use PCE, especially optical 
deployments, not having to implement BGP will be a big benefit. 

 

The authors have proposed that the intended status should be "experimental," 
and provide the scope of the experiment in the document, which I also fully 
support. 

 

One observation is that the authors make good use of the "Implementation 
Status" section, it looks like the first example is related to:  

 

Experimental validation of the ACTN architecture for flexi-grid optical 
networks using Active Stateful Hierarchical PCEs

https://ieeexplore.ieee.org/abstract/document/8025182

 

It might be useful to provide a reference to a pre-print (version), so you 
don't have to reference the paywall version of the paper:

https://zenodo.org/record/832904/files/Experimental%20Validation%20of%20the%20ACTN%20architecture.pdf

 

If it is not related, then you have one more implementation example. 

 

A few minor NITS that you might want  to squash as the document develops:

 

Abstract 

 

OLD: a Path Computation Elements (PCEs) require

NEW: Path Computation Elements (PCEs) require

 

Introduction 

 

Both "multiprotocol" and "multi-protocol" are used in the document.

 

OLD: Interior Gateway Protocol (IGPs)

NEW: Interior Gateway Protocols (IGPs)

 

OLD: It is important that the TED be

NEW: The TED must be

 

OLD:  timely topology and TED update at the PCE

NEW:  timely topology and TED updates at the PCE

 

OLD: This document describes a mechanism by which

NEW:  This document describes how

 

OLD:  Further as described

NEW: Further, as described

 

OLD: state synchronization between PCCs and PCEs in case of stateful PCE

NEW: state synchronization between PCCs and PCEs in the case of stateful PCE

 

Scope

 

OLD: this document specifies new PCEP message and object/TLVs

NEW: this document specifies new PCEP messages and object/TLVs

 

OLD: the rules for a unknown message as per

NEW: the rules for an unknown message as per

 

OLD: Further since a PCEP speaker

NEW: Further, since a PCEP speaker

 

Applicability 

 

You capitalize "Parent" but not "child". 

 

OLD: would like to use PCEP as direct southbound interface

NEW: would like to use PCEP as a direct southbound interface

 

Requirements for PCEP extensions  (extensions should be capitalized)

 

OLD: Following key requirements associated with link-state (and TE) 
distribution are identified for PCEP:

NEW:  The following key requirements associated with link-state (and TE) 
distribution are identified for PCEP:

 

OLD: During PCEP Initialization Phase

NEW: During the PCEP Initialization Phase

 

Capability Advertisement 

 

OLD: If the PCE that supports the extensions of this draft

NEW:  If the PCE supports the extensions defined in this draft

 

Initial Link-State (and TE) Synchronization

 

OLD: does not send positive acknowledgments

NEW: does not send positive acknowledgements

 

LS Object

 

OLD: In case PCC only provides local information

NEW: In case the PCC only provides local information

 

OLD: all types of LS object is as follows

NEW: all types of LS objects are as follows

 

Link Descriptors TLV

 

OLD: TLVs can carry data sourced either by IS-IS or OSPF or direct.

NEW: TLVs can carry data sourced by IS-IS, OSPF, or direct.

 

(As above for " Link Attributes TLV".)

 

Information and Data Models

 

OLD: An implementation SHOULD also provide the statistics:

NEW: An implementation SHOULD also provide the following statistics:

 

Verify Correct Operations

 

OLD: to those already listed in [RFC5440] .
NEW: to those already listed in [RFC5440].

 

BR, Dan. 

 

From: Aijun Wang <wangai...@tsinghua.org.cn> 
Sent: Monday, April 15, 2024 10:53 AM
To: daniele.i...@gmail.com
Cc: Adrian Farrel <adr...@olddog.co.uk>; julien.meu...@orange.com; pce@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [Pce] Adoption Poll for draft-dhodylee-pce-pcep-ls

 

Support for its forwarding.

 

PCEP has almost all the corresponding parts of BGP to control the devices, 
implement and deploy the PCEP-LS can assist the simplification of SDN 
controller/PCE.

 

Aijun Wang

China Telecom





On Apr 13, 2024, at 00:34, daniele.i...@gmail.com 
<mailto:daniele.i...@gmail.com>  wrote:



Hi Julien, all,

 

Adrian got the point. It would be an interesting experiment to see. And yes, 
the idea of PCEP-LS started from those cases where PCEP is there and BGP is 
not, hence I support (as author) the adoption of the draft.

 

Cheers,
Daniele  

 

From: Pce <pce-boun...@ietf.org <mailto:pce-boun...@ietf.org> > On Behalf Of 
Adrian Farrel
Sent: Thursday, April 4, 2024 7:17 PM
To: julien.meu...@orange.com <mailto:julien.meu...@orange.com> ; pce@ietf.org 
<mailto:pce@ietf.org> 
Subject: Re: [Pce] Adoption Poll for draft-dhodylee-pce-pcep-ls

 

Thanks, Julien. 

  

Once upon a time, I was quite skeptical about this idea, and unhappy to see it 
progress. But I have become used to the idea, and two things help me believe we 
should adopt this: 

  

1. As an Experiment, this can be tried out and we can see how well it works. If 
it is nonsense, no harm done. The authors' willingness to proceed as 
Experimental is reassuring. 

  

2. The applicability to optical networks (separate draft) is convincing because 
it is easier to believe that optical devices do not want to add BGP-LS to their 
code stack (even if it is only a couple of thpusand lines of code). 

  

So, I support adoption and commit to working with the authors to improve the 
draft. 

  

I think the current description of the Experiment is pretty good, but work will 
be needed to sort out the IANA stuff. I just posted a draft to help with 
Experimental Error-Types. 

  

Best, 

Adrian 

On 04/04/2024 18:18 CEST julien.meu...@orange.com 
<mailto:julien.meu...@orange.com>  wrote: 

  

  

Hi all, 

  

We have a long history around PCEP-LS. The rough consensus has been to 

progress it as experimental within the PCE WG, which makes more sense 

than an independent submission. 

As a result, do you support draft-dhodylee-pce-pcep-ls-27 [1] to become 

a PCE WG document? Please share your feedback using the PCE mailing 

list, including your comments and especially your rationales in case 

you're opposed. 

  

Thank you, 

  

Julien 

  

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[1] https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-dhodylee-pce-pcep-ls/ 

  

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