Interesting shot, the extreme  foreground on the left is distracting, its
too bright and too dominating.  I would turn the camera to the right and
include more sky, or frame the woman more to the left.  The right half of
the picture is very dynamic, the left half is just a large wall, it's not
being activated properly by the composition.

-Shawn

-----Original Message-----
From: Frantisek Vlcek [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED]
Sent: Monday, May 17, 2004 7:42 AM
To: PDML
Subject: PAW - News by the wall


News by the wall,

http://fotof.wz.cz/paw

A grab shot on the street. Could have chosen a little better moment though.
The
woman is reading a big newspaper.

Frantisek

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