On Thu, 4 Nov 2004 18:42:06 -0800, Shel Belinkoff
<[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> Hi Frank ...
> 
> This is a pretty good shot in that I think you captured the dog quite
> nicely.  It might be a more powerful photo if you moved in a bit closer,
> framed a bit tighter, shot from a slightly lower vantage point, more from
> the dog's level.  Since you mentioned Erwitt, I cannot help but think of
> the many photos he's presented that were made lower to the ground or showed
> less of the people above the waist.
> 
> The quality of the image is really poor on my screen, with lost detail in
> the dog, a tonal imbalance (grass too dark, shadows dark with some blocked,
> or close to blocked, details).  I fiddled with it a bit and brought out a
> broader tonality and opened things up a bit.  I did that for myself mostly,
> just to see how much detail there is in the image.  If you'd care to see
> the result, let me know.
> 
> Regardless of my nit picking, I like the photo.
> 
> Shel

Thanks for your thoughts, Shel.

I am somewhat frustrated that I can't seem to get my scans to look
like the print.  I'm hoping that once I learn to use PS a bit better
(waiting for the imminent arrival of a learning tool <g>), I can do a
better job of it.  For instance, the print is noticeably sharper.  The
buckle of the harness is much clearer on the print, and there's a
black mesh on the side of the fellow's knapsack that's clearly visible
in the print, but invisible on the scan.

As for the tonality, well, I just hit "auto", and hope for the best.

The other comments, re:  getting down lower - yup, I agree:  EE
would've been down on the ground, and that might have made for a more
interesting shot here.  As far as the tighter framing, I did want to
get both humans in there, especially the fellow (the owner?) on the
left.

But, on the whole, your points are all well taken, and as always, I
thank you for your thoughtful analysis.

cheers,
frank


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