Jon, Brave of you to put the work up. You may be kidding, but I think we all know such fright and hope at the same time. Grading on the curve, I'd have to pick #2. I believe it has a bit of artistic edge due to the light reflections falling in a larger, people free, expanse. It has an 'alone' feel about it. I like where you placed the lighted stands and how you've allowed positioning space around them so the viewer is free to follow their reflections. If you could have moved a little to your right, you might have marginalized that dark something with rails or pipes or something protruding at its right edge. I'm curious as to what it is, but it isn't an intriguing element. The fact that you saw 'something' in the scene leads me to encourage you to keep looking and reacting to possibilities.
Jack --- Jon Glass <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > and boy am I nervous. ;-) > > Actually, the photos from the market in Prague got > me thinking about > some photos I took a few weeks ago in Krakow's main > market square. I > went there to shoot photos of the St. Mary's Church > there, but the > umbrellas intrigued me. I shot a bunch, and these > are the ones that > turned out, more or less... > > My problem is that I'm not as happy as I thought I > would be with them, > and more so, cannot decide which I like best, so, > after the recent > discussion, I thought I would post them all, and ask > for advice. What > could I have done better? Did I try to get too much? > too little? > > Part of what happened was that visibility wasn't > very great, so it was > difficult to compose, but that's no excuse. :-) > > Fire away! > > oh, the url: > <http://homepage.mac.com/jonglass/rynek/index.html> > > -- > -Jon Glass > Krakow, Poland > <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> > > > __________________________________ Do you Yahoo!? The all-new My Yahoo! - What will yours do? http://my.yahoo.com
