Ok, here is version 2. Not sure if I like it better or not. The fewer bright spots seems better and seeing mom in the corner is nice - but the tighter look of the first sort of jumps at you.
http://www.daytonphoto.com/PAW/bkd_1539a.htm Pentax *istD, A 70-210/4, handheld ISO 800, 1/1000 @f/11.0 Converted from Raw to 16 bit Tiff in C1. Cropped, sized/sharpened for web using PictureWindow Pro. Comments welcome. Bruce