I love the "head-to-head comparison and the somewhat similar expression on the two faces. The pic may be stronger by loosing about 1/4 or so of the image off the bottom, allowing the viewer to concentrate more on the faces and heads. I just moved the image up and down in the browser window to see how it would look in that way. To my eye cropping a little above the yellow tip of the child's color above his head and a little below the zipper on the dad's sweater yields the strongest image. It almost looks like a square crop, and you;ve got the added impact of the diagonal running from the child through the father.
Shel > [Original Message] > From: Paul Stenquist > I spent an hour walking around downtown Birmingham, Michigan this > afternoon with the *istD and the thirty-year-old Vivitar Series 1 > 70/210/3.5. This snap was shot at f3.5, 1/1500, ISO 400, 210mm. I'm > growing quite fond of this ancient manual focus zoom. > http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=3322436 >