That was exactly my thought .... empty track, woman looking ... ~that~ tells the story a little more clearly ;-)) The hustle/bustle/car thing runs counter to the point you seem to want to convey.
Shel "You meet the nicest people with a Pentax" > [Original Message] > From: frank theriault > I'm of two minds about the car, and I really don't know whether I > prefer it there or not. > > I do like the feeling of traffic and hustle and bustle that it > implies. OTOH, it's hiding the streetcar track, and since we're > waiting for a streetcar, it might give more of a "streetcar stop" > atmosphere.
