Hi Boris,
This one doesn't work for me.
My first thought is that the woman is placed too far down in the
frame.
On second thought, it might not be crucial if not the breaking wave,
the green rocks and the woman forms a vertical line that pulls all the
weight of the composition into the right hand side of the frame.
There is also a diagonal in the direction where the woman is looking
from lower right to upper left, but it becomes weak by comparison.
"Deduced" purely by personal preference, of course...:-)
Jostein
----- Original Message -----
From: "Boris Liberman" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
To: <pentax-discuss@pdml.net>
Sent: Friday, April 14, 2006 8:10 PM
Subject: PESO - Contemplation
Hi!
By far 77 Ltd is my favorite lens...
I wonder if compositionally this image works... Please be brutal but
honest.
http://not.contaxg.com/document.php?id=13083
Thanks.
Boris
