On Jul 7, 2006, at 10:16 PM, Shel Belinkoff wrote: > http://home.earthlink.net/~morepix/brothers.html > DS w/K24/2.8
I usually don't look at these kinds of pictures very deeply. Not that I dislike pets or cats or dogs, only that such photos of people's pets only occasionally do much for me. This one is, however, poignant. The rendering work is excellent: very good tonalities. The composition could be stronger. The significant elements are the SPCA tag and the kittens' combined expressions ... I feel it would be stronger cropped nearly square placing these two elements in a more dynamic relationship. I don't need the food dish on the right. A vertical crop line just excising the second bar from the right improves the balance to my eye. Cutting it there draws me in ... my eye goes from the kitten's eyes directly to the SPCA tag and back. Give it a try, see what you think. Godfrey -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net
