I'll play with the crop some more. Your suggestion seems a little tight for me, but I can see that it can definitely benefit from some tightening up. Thanks!
Shel > [Original Message] > From: Godfrey DiGiorgi > > http://home.earthlink.net/~morepix/brothers.html > > I usually don't look at these kinds of pictures very deeply. Not that > I dislike pets or cats or dogs, only that such photos of people's > pets only occasionally do much for me. > > This one is, however, poignant. The rendering work is excellent: very > good tonalities. > > The composition could be stronger. The significant elements are the > SPCA tag and the kittens' combined expressions ... I feel it would be > stronger cropped nearly square placing these two elements in a more > dynamic relationship. I don't need the food dish on the right. A > vertical crop line just excising the second bar from the right > improves the balance to my eye. Cutting it there draws me in ... my > eye goes from the kitten's eyes directly to the SPCA tag and back. > > Give it a try, see what you think. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net
