http://www.fotocommunity.com/pc/pc/mypics/698154
Thank you for your comments. Missing the unsharp objects is one of my
fallbacks in photography. I just don't see junk. I am trying to train
myself. I see the good and get so excited about it I miss the bad. I was
very unsure about the crop. It just made it better in my eye.
Thank you again.
Sandy
From: "Jostein Øksne" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
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Subject: Some PUG comments 3 of 3
Date: Thu, 9 Nov 2006 20:05:59 +0100
"When I was a kid.........." by Sandy Hermann
The story around it makes the picture grow, but I think some of the
elements distract. The unsharp object in the lower left corner, and
the unsharp twig in the right hand corner. The long twig "meandering"
from the top is a nice element, I think, and it would have been even
better if it didn't cross the valve.
With the almost square format, the crop is actively chosen for the
presentation, and to me it seems like a good choice because it brings
the object so close and sort of intimate. Not easy to be intimate with
an old cart wheel...
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