On Feb 9, 2007, at 10:49 AM, Boris Liberman wrote: > http://not.contaxg.com/document.php?id=16622&full=1 > > The initial title for this image is "Silence, Twenty First Century". I > wonder if you think it fits.
I like the composition, it reminds me of some work by Hiroshi Sugimoto I was looking at yesterday. Improvements: - try a slight counterclockwise rotation ... there's something slightly off about the way the building intersects the white space of the sky. - A little bit steeper contrast on the building tones, with slightly higher grays, might be in order. But my biggest concern is that it doesn't seem as sharp as it ought to be for this kind of photo. You're working with the 80-320 and at long focal length settings ... For both this and the previous shot you posted of the ibis, a tripod and remote release would have made a big difference! Godfrey -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net
