Hi ...

You're right about the white light. There was little I could about it do
wrt to exposure and development to tone it down.  Less development would
have muddied the print even more and ruined what little contrast there
is between the woman's collar and her face and sweater.  Had the print
been made in the darkroom I'd have burned that area a bit.  PS 6.0 has a
feature that will allow dodging and burning, and even the scanner may
have a way to set the levels. Of course, I don't know how to do that
yet, but learning is just a matter of time.  Your comment is right on
the money.

BTW, the film used for this shot is TX ... compare the grain structure
of the current TX with that of the older TX in the photo of April.  The
developers used were similar, but the newer TX seems to have a finer,
smoother grain pattern without losing accutance, and a smoother
tonality.  It may just be that my poorer skills in the early days
contributed to the grain difference ...

Bob Walkden wrote:
> 
> Hi,
> 
> I prefer the uncropped version because the woman is positioned more
> closely to a 3rd. The cropped version is somewhat unbalanced. Unfortunately
> the bright white behind her head is on the 3rd. White always drags the eye
> towards it, and with it being bang on the 3rd it is rather distracting. It
> might pay to tone it down a little.

-- 
Shel Belinkoff
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