On Nov 11, 2007, at 12:50 PM, Paul Stenquist wrote: > This is probably off the mark for a model portfolio, but it's one of > the pics Lindsey and I chose to send to her agent. It's different. > Rather than taming the highlights, I chose to let it ramp down from > them. What say you? > http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=6628457&size=lg
This picture would look better cropped about square to eliminate the glarey highlight on the clock face and with a little work to remove the upper reflection of the lights in the top right of the clock face. The specular reflection bouncing onto her shoulder and chest, causing the sharp shadows of her hair and the fold of her shoulder, is also distracting and should be softened. The pose is a little odd: she's looking off somewhere and her eyes are dark, which does not engage the viewer. For a modeling shot, I'd be less inclined to use it. Godfrey -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.