That works for me. Cheers, Paul
Godfrey DiGiorgi wrote: > Based on your and Paul's responses, and studying the photo a bit > further, what I think works is to soften the intensity of the large > dark twig by a bit to reduce its weight in the scene. That achieves > the idea I had in mind. > > I've replaced the original with a revision... > > http://homepage.mac.com/ramarren/photo/PAW7/48b.htm > > Further comments invited, of course. > > Thanks for all your comments! :-) > > best, > Godfrey > > > On Nov 25, 2007, at 9:44 PM, ann sanfedele wrote: > >> seriously - the darkest thing in the photo is blurry - and it is on >> the >> right... so it kinda leaps out at you. >> if the foreground twigs had been blurry and the large twig sharp it >> perhaps might have worked ... >> For me it isn't that you used shallow DOF, but that what was not in >> focus overwhelmed the rest. > > -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.