I agree with Doug.

Also the blank darkness under the shelf is distracting.

Kenneth Waller
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----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Doug Brewer" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
Subject: Re: PESO Curios in the China Cabinet


>
> Looks like your light is pretty good on this, good job there.
>
> However, you have a lot of stuff in the frame, and it doesn't work
> together. If you're going to include many elements, they have to work
> in concert, and it's not happening here. Try arranging different
> ways, keeping your shapes and lines in mind.
>
> I think you have a good idea here, but you need to work on it a
> little to find the photo.
>
> Doug
>
>
>
> On Jan 27, 2008, at 9:43 PM, Christine Aguila wrote:
>
>> Hi Everyone:
>>
>> Trying my hand at some still life and working some very old flood
>> lamps I
>> have.  I only used one lamp mounted on a very wobbly tripod with an
>> umbrella.   Camera tripod mounted.
>>
>>
>> Color:  K10D/50mm Macro 2.8 @ 2 seconds at f11
>> small
>> http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=6886097
>>
>> larger
>> http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=6886097&size=lg
>>
>>
>> BW:  K10D/50mm Macro 2.8 @ 2 seconds at f11
>>
>> small
>> http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=6886102
>>
>> larger
>> http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=6886102&size=lg
>>
>> Any preferences?  Color?  BW?  My husband prefers color, but I
>> can't decide.
>> Any suggestions on how to improve the BW?
>>
>> Cheers, Christine
>
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