A very good rendering, and the composition of the flower and buds is excellent, but its position in the frame feels wrong. I think you need to move the whole thing down towards the base of the frame, evening out the placement. There is also a rather annoying intrusion into the right of the frame.
Bob > -----Original Message----- > From: [EMAIL PROTECTED] [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] On > Behalf Of Godfrey DiGiorgi > Sent: 10 February 2008 19:28 > To: DUG; PDML List; PAW; SeePhoto Talk > Subject: PESO 2008 - 04 - GDG > > From this morning's walk ... > > http://homepage.mac.com/godders/04-daisy.jpg > Daisy - Sunnyvale 2008 > Panasonic L1 + Pentax-M 50mm f/1.4 > ISO 160 @ f/8 @ 1/80 sec > > Comments and critique always appreciated. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
