What Bob said. Also another intrusion at the top.
One solution I see to the positioning, might be to just make the flower bigger in the frame. I really do like the B+W rendering here. Kenneth Waller http://www.tinyurl.com/272u2f ----- Original Message ----- From: "Bob W" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> Subject: RE: PESO 2008 - 04 - GDG >A very good rendering, and the composition of the flower and buds is > excellent, but its position in the frame feels wrong. I think you need > to move the whole thing down towards the base of the frame, evening > out the placement. There is also a rather annoying intrusion into the > right of the frame. > > Bob > >> -----Original Message----- >> From: [EMAIL PROTECTED] [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] On >> Behalf Of Godfrey DiGiorgi >> Sent: 10 February 2008 19:28 >> To: DUG; PDML List; PAW; SeePhoto Talk >> Subject: PESO 2008 - 04 - GDG >> >> From this morning's walk ... >> >> http://homepage.mac.com/godders/04-daisy.jpg >> Daisy - Sunnyvale 2008 >> Panasonic L1 + Pentax-M 50mm f/1.4 >> ISO 160 @ f/8 @ 1/80 sec >> >> Comments and critique always appreciated. > -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
