From: Ann Sanfedele
Ken Waller wrote:

> The mask has potential but I'd get rid of the bright spots in the
> background.
>
> Kenneth Waller
> http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/kennethwaller
Something both you and JAck mentioned, Ken...
OTOH...

What I'd like to do is clone out the ones ON the mask... and the one on
the "eye" on the right....  and touching the top.
The rest of the back ground would be less distracting then, I think...

The Hotel shot is nice enough, and the light on the chair is nice, too -
but I bet you can do better with it... something not
quite intriguing enough - hmm maybe just needs a bit of boost in
saturation?   Wondering which Garbo flic is being advertised .

ann


It's a poster I think is for the French release of Wild Orchids, which doesn't seem to have been Wild Orchids in French. The French title appears to have been Terre de Volupté.

http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0020589/

Babel Fish translates Terre de Volupté as "Ground of Pleasure" ["Land of Pleasure" perhaps?], and translates Wild Orchids into French as "Orchidées sauvages"

The movie poster is more famous than the movie itself. That's how I found the film title.

http://www.artprints.com/-ap/Terre-de-Volupte-Wild-Orchids-Posters_p199422_.htm

Oh ... and, Boris

The only thing I would look at to improve your photos is on the right hand temple there's kind of a white blob that looks like something spotted it and ran down - I'd tone that down slightly, try to blend it more into the color of the temple piece.

Other than that, I wouldn't change either one of them.

I like the mask more than I like the hotel lobby, and I like the hotel lobby a lot.

>
>
> ----- Original Message ----- From: "Boris Liberman" <bori...@gmail.com>
>
> Subject: Boris PESOs #1 and #2
>
>
>> Hi!
>>
>> I can't seem to get enough from Neve Tzedek neighborhood of Tel Aviv
>> and late afternoon shooting.
>>
>> http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2011/01/peso-2011-01-mask-of-mystery.html
>>
>>
>> 
http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2011/01/peso-2011-02-boutique-hotel-entrance.html
>>
>>
>> Please be brutal and honest.


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