I reduced the contrast of that bar (it's window structure), and toyed with removing it altogether (mucked-up my 1st attempt), but cropping might just be the best answer.
Thanks Paul! On Tue, Dec 18, 2012 at 7:24 AM, Paul Stenquist <pnstenqu...@comcast.net> wrote: > I like the pose and the subject's look. But I find the crop at the top of the > head and intersecting ceiling line distracting. A deeper crop might be better. > Paul > On Dec 18, 2012, at 5:19 AM, Bruce Walker <bruce.wal...@gmail.com> wrote: > >> Thanks, Gerrit. >> >> >> On Mon, Dec 17, 2012 at 4:38 PM, Gerrit Visser <gerrit...@gmail.com> wrote: >>> Just enough colour in the first one to give it a bit of a kick. You get the >>> impression that he is already thinking of the next project. >>> >>> Gerrit >>> >>> -----Original Message----- >>> From: PDML [mailto:pdml-boun...@pdml.net] On Behalf Of Bruce Walker >>> Sent: December 17, 2012 4:12 PM >>> To: Pentax Discuss Mailing List >>> Subject: PESO - The Filmmaker >>> >>> My wife has been pursuing a creative project interviewing Canadian indie >>> filmmakers about their projects and lives. I've been tagging along to help >>> (lighting, grip, sometimes DP) and to get stills of the subjects. >>> >>> I have enough decent shots from these outings now that I've decided to make >>> my own series: The Filmmakers. Here's the latest: >>> >>> "Jeffrey W. Pike" >>> http://www.flickr.com/bruce_m_walker/8278639503/lightbox/ >>> >>> K20D, DA* 55/1.4, f/2.5, 1/320th, ISO 400. >>> Lr 4.2, PS CS5. >>> 160-LED video light from camera-rt for fill. >>> >>> And bonus b&w shot: >>> http://www.flickr.com/bruce_m_walker/8279699032/lightbox/ >>> >>> K20D, DA* 55/1.4, f/3.2, 1/320th, ISO 200. >>> Nik Silver Efex Pro 2 >>> >>> >>> Bonus short movie: if you like creepy tales, check out Pike's 2012 9-min >>> short "Minatory" on Vimeo: https://vimeo.com/55201061 >>> >>> Enjoy! >>> -- >>> -bmw >>> >>> -- >>> PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List >>> PDML@pdml.net >>> http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net >>> to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and >>> follow the directions. >>> >>> >>> -- >>> PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List >>> PDML@pdml.net >>> http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net >>> to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and >>> follow the directions. >> >> >> >> -- >> -bmw >> >> -- >> PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List >> PDML@pdml.net >> http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net >> to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and >> follow the directions. > > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > PDML@pdml.net > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow > the directions. -- -bmw -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.