I reduced the contrast of that bar (it's window structure), and toyed
with removing it altogether (mucked-up my 1st attempt), but cropping
might just be the best answer.

Thanks Paul!


On Tue, Dec 18, 2012 at 7:24 AM, Paul Stenquist <pnstenqu...@comcast.net> wrote:
> I like the pose and the subject's look. But I find the crop at the top of the 
> head and intersecting ceiling line distracting. A deeper crop might be better.
> Paul
> On Dec 18, 2012, at 5:19 AM, Bruce Walker <bruce.wal...@gmail.com> wrote:
>
>> Thanks, Gerrit.
>>
>>
>> On Mon, Dec 17, 2012 at 4:38 PM, Gerrit Visser <gerrit...@gmail.com> wrote:
>>> Just enough colour in the first one to give it a bit of a kick. You get the
>>> impression that he is already thinking of the next project.
>>>
>>> Gerrit
>>>
>>> -----Original Message-----
>>> From: PDML [mailto:pdml-boun...@pdml.net] On Behalf Of Bruce Walker
>>> Sent: December 17, 2012 4:12 PM
>>> To: Pentax Discuss Mailing List
>>> Subject: PESO - The Filmmaker
>>>
>>> My wife has been pursuing a creative project interviewing Canadian indie
>>> filmmakers about their projects and lives. I've been tagging along to help
>>> (lighting, grip, sometimes DP) and to get stills of the subjects.
>>>
>>> I have enough decent shots from these outings now that I've decided to make
>>> my own series: The Filmmakers. Here's the latest:
>>>
>>> "Jeffrey W. Pike"
>>> http://www.flickr.com/bruce_m_walker/8278639503/lightbox/
>>>
>>> K20D, DA* 55/1.4, f/2.5, 1/320th, ISO 400.
>>> Lr 4.2, PS CS5.
>>> 160-LED video light from camera-rt for fill.
>>>
>>> And bonus b&w shot:
>>> http://www.flickr.com/bruce_m_walker/8279699032/lightbox/
>>>
>>> K20D, DA* 55/1.4, f/3.2, 1/320th, ISO 200.
>>> Nik Silver Efex Pro 2
>>>
>>>
>>> Bonus short movie: if you like creepy tales, check out Pike's 2012 9-min
>>> short "Minatory" on Vimeo: https://vimeo.com/55201061
>>>
>>> Enjoy!
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