The lighting is excellent as usual. I think the problem here is that the pose is unnatural. It looks uncomfortable. Her right hand isn’t contacting her head — it’s kind of waving at her ear -- and she’s leaning to the right at a strange angle The idea is good: a shot in repose. But you have to get her to land in a natural position that’s still attractive. Not easy.
Paul On Jun 11, 2014, at 10:34 AM, Bruce Walker <bruce.wal...@gmail.com> wrote: > On Wed, Jun 11, 2014 at 10:22 AM, Bill <anotherdrunken...@gmail.com> wrote: >> On 11/06/2014 8:20 AM, Bruce Walker wrote: >>> >>> Do you mean in the way Frank suggests? >>> >>> Thanks for the look and comment, Bill. >>> >> >> Yeah, it just looks really forced and contrived. Technically it is flawless >> though. > > Thanks, Bill. Did you see my comment to Frank? Can I put the blame on > my attempt to caption it -- I have no idea what was actually going > through the model's head at that moment. > > The good news for me is that am free to concentrate 100% on connecting > with the model, if you guys all feel the lighting is okay. :-) That > will be my next plateau. > > -- > -bmw > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > PDML@pdml.net > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow > the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
