Actually - I read her as being unhappy and felt her expression showed that.. maybe what I saw was her being uncomfortable physically..

See what you all mean about the pose - but as a model she conveyed
real emotion to me.

ann

On 6/11/2014 11:19, Paul Stenquist wrote:
The lighting is excellent as usual. I think the problem here is that the pose 
is unnatural. It looks uncomfortable. Her right hand isn’t contacting her head 
— it’s kind of waving at her ear -- and she’s leaning to the right at a strange 
angle  The idea is good: a shot in repose. But you have to get her to land in a 
natural position that’s still attractive. Not easy.

Paul
On Jun 11, 2014, at 10:34 AM, Bruce Walker <bruce.wal...@gmail.com> wrote:

On Wed, Jun 11, 2014 at 10:22 AM, Bill <anotherdrunken...@gmail.com> wrote:
On 11/06/2014 8:20 AM, Bruce Walker wrote:

Do you mean in the way Frank suggests?

Thanks for the look and comment, Bill.


Yeah, it just looks really forced and contrived. Technically it is flawless
though.

Thanks, Bill. Did you see my comment to Frank? Can I put the blame on
my attempt to caption it -- I have no idea what was actually going
through the model's head at that moment.

The good news for me is that am free to concentrate 100% on connecting
with the model, if you guys all feel the lighting is okay. :-) That
will be my next plateau.

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