I disagree. The barn is the focal point, the others add to the scene. For
instance, Bruegel's paintings & Giles' cartoons mostly have things going on
in the background (often naughty) which adds interest & compels the viewer
to look a bit deeper.
Alan C
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From: Mark C
Sent: Saturday, July 01, 2017 7:38 PM
To: pdml@pdml.net
Subject: Re: PESO - Down In Indiana
Thanks, Marne. I think you are right about the competing centers of
interest. I have other shots without the fence and truck. I might try a
shot with just the fence, no truck, since I don't have one with just the
truck and no fence. Without one or the other I don't think there is
enough going on in the image.
Mark
On 7/1/2017 1:07 AM, Marnie (aka Doe) wrote:
Great sky.
I usually love your shots, it's strange to me to say I have some quibbles.
Something about the placement of the barn, re fence and passing truck
isn't pleasing to me. (Too many focal points? Not sure.)
I would have walked closer to the fence to leave it out. (I'd say crop it,
but don't think it can be done now. At least not without cloning.)
Take with a grain of salt, Marnie aka Doe :-)
On 6/30/2017 8:49 PM, Mark C wrote:
I spent the last week down in rural Indiana, got home a few hours ago
and am starting to review images. Here's a shot from yesterday -
http://www.markcassino.com/b2evolution/index.php/down-in-indiana
or on flickr:
https://www.flickr.com/photos/markcassino/35641165115/
K1 and FA 20-35 f4 @ f16.
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