On Mon, Jul 18, 2022 at 08:23:23PM -0500, Justin Pryzby wrote:
> > Increase hash_mem_multiplier default to 2.0 (Peter Geoghegan)
> > This allows query hash operations to use double the amount of work_mem 
> > memory as other operations.
> 
> I wonder if it's worth pointing out that a query may end up using not just 2x
> more memory (since work_mem*hash_mem_multiplier is per node), but 2**N more,
> for N nodes.

Uh, I said "per operation" so people might realize there can be multiple
work_mem memory operations per query.  I don't think I can do more in
this text.  I can't think of a way to improve it without making it more
confusing.

> > Remove pg_dump's --no-synchronized-snapshots option since all supported 
> > server versions support synchronized snapshots (Tom Lane)
> 
> It'd be better to put that after the note about dropping support for upgrading
> clusters older than v9.2 in psql/pg_dump/pg_upgrade.

Well, I put the --no-synchronized-snapshots item in incompatibilities
since it is a user-visible change that might require script adjustments.
However, I put the limit of pg_dump to 9.2 and greater into the pg_dump
section.  Are you suggesting I move the--no-synchronized-snapshots item
down there?  That doesn't match with the way I have listed other
incompatibilities so I am resistant to do that.

> > Enable system and TOAST btree indexes to efficiently store duplicates 
> > (Peter Geoghegan)
> 
> Say "btree indexes on system [and TOAST] tables"

Okay, updated to:

        Allow btree indexes on system and TOAST tables to efficiently
        store duplicates (Peter Geoghegan)

> > Prevent changes to columns only indexed by BRIN indexes from disabling HOT 
> > updates (Josef Simanek)
> 
> This was reverted

Ah, yes, removed.

> > Generate periodic log message during slow server starts (Nitin Jadhav, 
> > Robert Haas)
> messages plural
> 
> > Messages report the cause of the delay. The time interval for notification 
> > is controlled by the new server variable log_startup_progress_interval.
> *The messages

Ah, yes, fixed.

> > Add server variable shared_memory_size to report the size of allocated 
> > shared memory (Nathan Bossart)
> > Add server variable shared_memory_size_in_huge_pages to report the number 
> > of huge memory pages required (Nathan Bossart)
> 
> Maybe these should say server *parameter* since they're not really "variable".

Uh, I think of parameters as something passed.  We do call them server
variables, or read-only server variables.  I can add "read-only" but it
seems odd.

> > 0. Add support for LZ4 and Zstandard compression of server-side base 
> > backups (Jeevan Ladhe, Robert Haas)
> > 1. Allow pg_basebackup to use LZ4 and Zstandard compression on server-side 
> > base backup files (Dipesh Pandit, Jeevan Ladhe)
> > 2. Allow pg_basebackup's --compress option to control the compression 
> > method and options (Michael Paquier, Robert Haas)
> >    New options include server-gzip (gzip on the server), client-gzip (same 
> > as gzip).
> > 3. Allow pg_basebackup to compress on the server side and decompress on the 
> > client side before storage (Dipesh Pandit)
> >    This is accomplished by specifying compression on the server side and 
> > plain output format.
> 
> I still think these expose the incremental development rather than the
> user-facing change.

Well, they are in different parts of the system, though they are clearly
all related.  I am afraid merging them would be even more confusing.

> 1. It seems wrong to say "server-side" since client-side compression with
> LZ4/zstd is also supported.

Agreed.  I changed it to:

       Allow pg_basebackup to do LZ4 and Zstandard server-side compression
       on base backup files (Dipesh Pandit, Jeevan Ladhe)

> 2. It's confusing to say that the new options are server-gzip and client-gzip,
> since it just mentioned new algorithms;

I see your point since there will be new options for LZ4 and Zstandard
too, so I just removed that paragraph.

> 3. I'm not sure this needs to be mentioned at all; maybe it should be a
> "detail" following the item about server-side compression.

See my concerns above --- it seems too complex to merge into something
else.  However, I am open to an entire rewrite of these items.

> > Tables added to the listed schemas in the future will also be replicated.
> 
> "Tables later added" is clearer.  Otherwise "in the future" sounds like maybe
> in v16 or v17 we'll start replicating those tables.

Agreed, new wording:

        Tables added later to the listed schemas will also be replicated.

> > Allow subscribers to stop logical replication application on error (Osumi 
> > Takamichi, Mark Dilger)
> "application" sounds off.

Agreed.  New text is:

        Allow subscribers to stop the application of logical replication
        changes on error

> > Add new default WAL-logged method for database creation (Dilip Kumar)
> "New default" sounds off.  Say "Add new WAL-logged method for database 
> creation, used by default".

Agreed, new text:

       Add new <acronym>WAL</acronym>-logged method for <link
       linkend="sql-createdatabase">database creation</link> (Dilip Kumar)

       This is the new default for database creation and avoids the need
       for checkpoints during database creation; the old method is still
       available.

> > Have pg_upgrade preserve relfilenodes, tablespace, and database OIDs 
> > between old and new clusters (Shruthi KC, Antonin Houska)
> 
> "tablespace OIDs" or "tablespace and database OIDs and relfilenodes"

Good point, I went with:

        Have <application>pg_upgrade</application> preserve tablespace
        and database OIDs, and relfilenodes between old and new clusters
        (Shruthi KC, Antonin Houska)

> > Limit support of pg_upgrade to old servers running PostgreSQL 9.2 and later 
> > (Tom Lane)
> 
> The word "old" doesn't appear in the 2 release notes items about pg_dump and
> psql, and "old" makes it sound sounds like "antique" rather than "source".

Uh, so pg_upgrade uses the terms "old" and "new" in its option names,
e.g., oldbindir, newbindir.  I don't think "source" would be an
improvement here.

> > Some internal-use-only types have also been assigned this column.
> this *value

Good point, I went with:

        Some other internal-use-only values have also been assigned to
        this column.

> > Allow custom scan provders to indicate if they support projections (Sven 
> > Klemm)
> > The default is now that custom scan providers can't support projections, so 
> > they need to be updated for this release.
> 
> Per the commit message, they don't "need" to be updated.
> I think this should say "The default now assumes that a custom scan provider
> does not support projections; to retain optimal performance, they should be
> updated to indicate whether that's supported.

Okay, I went with this text:

      The default is now that custom scan providers are assumed to not
      support projections;  those that do need to be updated for this
      release.

Cumulative applied patch attached.

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diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release-15.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release-15.sgml
index cde78b6181..dfa3c74535 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/release-15.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/release-15.sgml
@@ -538,13 +538,14 @@ Author: Tom Lane <t...@sss.pgh.pa.us>
 
     <listitem>
      <para>
-      Allow <link linkend="custom-scan">custom scan provders</link>
+      Allow <link linkend="custom-scan">custom scan providers</link>
       to indicate if they support projections (Sven Klemm)
      </para>
 
      <para>
-      The default is now that custom scan providers can't support
-      projections, so they need to be updated for this release.
+      The default is now that custom scan providers are assumed to not
+      support projections;  those that do need to be updated for this
+      release.
      </para>
     </listitem>
 
@@ -730,9 +731,9 @@ Author: Peter Geoghegan <p...@bowt.ie>
 
       <listitem>
        <para>
-        Enable system and <link
-        linkend="storage-toast"><acronym>TOAST</acronym></link> btree
-        indexes to efficiently store duplicates (Peter Geoghegan)
+        Allow btree indexes on system and <link
+        linkend="storage-toast"><acronym>TOAST</acronym></link>
+        tables to efficiently store duplicates (Peter Geoghegan)
        </para>
 
        <para>
@@ -753,19 +754,6 @@ Author: Alexander Korotkov <akorot...@postgresql.org>
        </para>
       </listitem>
 
-<!--
-Author: Tomas Vondra <tomas.von...@postgresql.org>
-2021-11-30 [5753d4ee3] Ignore BRIN indexes when checking for HOT udpates
--->
-
-      <listitem>
-       <para>
-        Prevent changes to columns only indexed by <link
-        linkend="brin"><acronym>BRIN</acronym></link> indexes from
-        disabling <acronym>HOT</acronym> updates (Josef Simanek)
-       </para>
-      </listitem>
-
 <!--
 Author: Peter Eisentraut <pe...@eisentraut.org>
 2022-02-03 [94aa7cc5f] Add UNIQUE null treatment option
@@ -1085,7 +1073,7 @@ Author: Alvaro Herrera <alvhe...@alvh.no-ip.org>
        </para>
 
        <para>
-        Messages report the cause of the delay.  The time interval for
+        The messages report the cause of the delay.  The time interval for
         notification is controlled by the new server variable <link
         linkend="guc-log-startup-progress-interval"><varname>log_startup_progress_interval</varname></link>.
        </para>
@@ -1488,7 +1476,7 @@ Author: Amit Kapila <akap...@postgresql.org>
         linkend="sql-createpublication"><command>CREATE PUBLICATION pub1
         FOR ALL TABLES IN SCHEMA s1,s2;</command></link>  <command>ALTER
         PUBLICATION</command> supports a similar syntax.  Tables added
-        to the listed schemas in the future will also be replicated.
+        later to the listed schemas will also be replicated.
        </para>
       </listitem>
 
@@ -1614,7 +1602,7 @@ Author: Amit Kapila <akap...@postgresql.org>
 
       <listitem>
        <para>
-        Allow subscribers to stop logical replication application on error
+        Allow subscribers to stop the application of logical replication changes on error
         (Osumi Takamichi, Mark Dilger)
        </para>
 
@@ -1752,13 +1740,14 @@ Author: Robert Haas <rh...@postgresql.org>
 
      <listitem>
       <para>
-       Add new default <acronym>WAL</acronym>-logged method for <link
+       Add new <acronym>WAL</acronym>-logged method for <link
        linkend="sql-createdatabase">database creation</link> (Dilip Kumar)
       </para>
 
       <para>
-       This avoids the need for checkpoints during database creation;
-       the old method is still available.
+       This is the new default for database creation and avoids the need
+       for checkpoints during database creation; the old method is still
+       available.
       </para>
      </listitem>
 
@@ -2510,8 +2499,8 @@ Author: Robert Haas <rh...@postgresql.org>
 
      <listitem>
       <para>
-       Allow <application>pg_basebackup</application> to use LZ4 and
-       Zstandard compression on server-side base backup files (Dipesh
+       Allow <application>pg_basebackup</application> to do LZ4 and
+       Zstandard server-side compression on base backup files (Dipesh
        Pandit, Jeevan Ladhe)
       </para>
      </listitem>
@@ -2531,12 +2520,6 @@ Author: Robert Haas <rh...@postgresql.org>
        <option>--compress</option> option to control the compression
        method and options (Michael Paquier, Robert Haas)
       </para>
-
-      <para>
-       New options include <literal>server-gzip</literal> (gzip
-       on the server), <literal>client-gzip</literal> (same as
-       <literal>gzip</literal>).
-      </para>
      </listitem>
 
 <!--
@@ -2799,8 +2782,8 @@ Author: Robert Haas <rh...@postgresql.org>
 
       <listitem>
        <para>
-        Have <application>pg_upgrade</application> preserve relfilenodes,
-        tablespace, and database OIDs between old and new clusters
+        Have <application>pg_upgrade</application> preserve tablespace
+        and database OIDs, and relfilenodes between old and new clusters
         (Shruthi KC, Antonin Houska)
        </para>
       </listitem>
@@ -3009,7 +2992,7 @@ Author: Tom Lane <t...@sss.pgh.pa.us>
       </para>
 
       <para>
-       Some internal-use-only types have also been assigned this column.
+       Some other internal-use-only values have also been assigned to this column.
       </para>
      </listitem>
 

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