thanks, i started in trd person then ended in 1st person so i went back n made it all 1st person :p when i add the next part ill chang it back to 3rd person. thanks for the advice
habib- #4015 -----Original Message----- Date: Friday, June 25, 2010 7:35:25 pm To: [email protected] From: "HSK Quaestor" <[email protected]> Subject: Re: [Plagueis] wiki page Hey Habib, You've got an interesting backstory. One word of advice, though, is that the DJBWiki is one big encyclopedia. The info might be a bit easier to read if written from the third person. On Fri, Jun 25, 2010 at 8:23 AM, <[email protected]> wrote: > <salute> > > I looked over your two pages, they both look good. off to a good start. > > Koga Kage > Aedile of House Exar Kun > > > > -----Original Message----- > From: jason nix <[email protected]> > To: [email protected] > Sent: Fri, Jun 25, 2010 3:36 am > Subject: Re: [Plagueis] wiki page > > lol oops i forgot the link :p > > http://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/wiki/index.php?title=Habib_Ali > > > habib- > > --- On *Fri, 6/25/10, jason nix <[email protected]>* wrote: > > > From: jason nix <[email protected]> > Subject: [Plagueis] wiki page > To: [email protected] > Date: Friday, June 25, 2010, 3:36 AM > > I would like some feed back about my wiki pages, any constructive feed > back is much appreciated > > Habib Ali- > #4015 > > > -- May the Force serve you well. Kal di Plagia Vorrac Sith Battlemaster Brigadier General, Intelligence(0-7) Quaestor of House Satal Keto "Only a fool sees good, evil, even people and objects. I see only assets, from the smallest item to my own life, all expendable if it furthers my cause."
