No worries. Feel free to give me a shout if you want some editing help, I'm more than willing to do my part for a Clanmate. :)
On Fri, Jun 25, 2010 at 6:41 PM, jason nix <[email protected]> wrote: > thanks, i started in trd person then ended in 1st person so i went back n > made it all 1st person :p when i add the next part ill chang it back to 3rd > person. thanks for the advice > > habib- > #4015 > > -----Original Message----- > Date: Friday, June 25, 2010 7:35:25 pm > To: [email protected] > From: "HSK Quaestor" <[email protected]> > Subject: Re: [Plagueis] wiki page > > Hey Habib, > > You've got an interesting backstory. One word of advice, though, is that > the > DJBWiki is one big encyclopedia. The info might be a bit easier to read if > written from the third person. > > On Fri, Jun 25, 2010 at 8:23 AM, <[email protected]> wrote: > > > <salute> > > > > I looked over your two pages, they both look good. off to a good start. > > > > Koga Kage > > Aedile of House Exar Kun > > > > > > > > -----Original Message----- > > From: jason nix <[email protected]> > > To: [email protected] > > Sent: Fri, Jun 25, 2010 3:36 am > > Subject: Re: [Plagueis] wiki page > > > > lol oops i forgot the link :p > > > > http://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/wiki/index.php?title=Habib_Ali > > > > > > habib- > > > > --- On *Fri, 6/25/10, jason nix <[email protected]>* wrote: > > > > > > From: jason nix <[email protected]> > > Subject: [Plagueis] wiki page > > To: [email protected] > > Date: Friday, June 25, 2010, 3:36 AM > > > > I would like some feed back about my wiki pages, any constructive feed > > back is much appreciated > > > > Habib Ali- > > #4015 > > > > > > > > > -- > May the Force serve you well. > > Kal di Plagia Vorrac > Sith Battlemaster > Brigadier General, Intelligence(0-7) > Quaestor of House Satal Keto > > "Only a fool sees good, evil, even people and objects. I see only assets, > from the smallest item to my own life, all expendable if it furthers my > cause." > > > -- May the Force serve you well. Kal di Plagia Vorrac Sith Battlemaster Brigadier General, Intelligence(0-7) Quaestor of House Satal Keto "Only a fool sees good, evil, even people and objects. I see only assets, from the smallest item to my own life, all expendable if it furthers my cause."
