I am not sure how you want suggestions formatted so I will just put them in the body of the email.
Okay I only got part-way through aa.html, I decided I should make sure that this is what you are looking for before I keep going. Also could you please tell me what format you would like my suggestions in...possibly a diff file? >From a.html: First we will list the necessary components you need to run Plucker, and we will give you a short introduction on how Plucker works. --- First we will list the necessary components you need to run Plucker and give you a short introduction on how Plucker works. >From aa.html An alert will be display if there is not enough free space on your device. --- An alert will display if there is not enough free space on your device. Actually, this is not part of Plucker itself and how this is done depends on the platform you using. --- Actually, this is not part of Plucker itself and how this is done depends on the platform you are using. It is only necessary that you understand that you must transfer the data in any way to your hand-held. --- It is only necessary that you understand that you must, in some way, transfer the data to your hand-held. Even on Windows Plucker does not start the gathering process automatically if you press the HotSync button on your cradle, as some other off-line web readers do. --- Plucker does not start the gathering process automatically when you press the HotSync button on your cradle as some other off-line web readers do (not even on Windows). In fact the whole process can be automatized using e.g. cron jobs, by a (shareware) tool like AutoSync from http://www.rgps.com or some similar package. --- In fact the whole process can be automatized through a tool like AutoSync (shareware) from http://www.rgps.com, cron jobs, or other similar tools. (I would put AutoSync first just because it aims itself at less sophisticated users, people who understand cron jobs probably don't even need to be told the process can be automated, they already inherently know.) FreeBSDIt --- FreeBSD. It Nathan Bullock ===== Visit my website at http://bullock.mooo.com ______________________________________________________________________ Post your free ad now! http://personals.yahoo.ca _______________________________________________ plucker-list mailing list [EMAIL PROTECTED] http://lists.rubberchicken.org/mailman/listinfo/plucker-list
