On Wed, 16 Jan 2008 22:17:09 +0100, Ian Hickson <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
On Wed, 16 Jan 2008, David Orchard wrote:
Further, the current English style has problems.  I find text like "If
the item list has no next list item go to the next step in the overall
set of steps. " to be very confusing.

I think it's fine to point out confusing sentences to the editor to have
them be clarified. I agree that a comma and the word "then" in the above
sentence would make it easier to read.

Thanks. English is not my native language so all such comments are very much appreciated. Fixed all instances I could find.


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