Thanks Michael! Scott, I plan be on the Linked Life Data call Monday 12/10 - perhaps we integrate everyone's comments, which all seem fairly easy to address, and then call this a wrap....what are your thoughts?

-Rich

On 11/29/2012 12:20 PM, Michael Miller wrote:

hi richard and scott,

richard, thanks for your great work integrating everyone's contributions into a coherent whole. it reads nicely now.

some very minor editing points:

·section 2, the numbered list probably doesn't need to be numbered since the questions themselves are numbered

·section 2, the second question in the numbered list is incomplete: Q2: Are some relational schemas easier to make to RDF than others and is a direct <http://www.w3.org/2001/sw/hcls/notes/hcls-rdf-guide/#Q2>

·in Q2, last paragraph, 'interLinked Data' is awkward, maybe no caps or a hyphen?

·Q6 ends with 'p>'

·in Q7, third bullet, 'Use of the BioPortal <http://bioportal.bioontology.org/> or OntoBee <http://www.ontobee.org/> for matching entities and their URIs.' is a fragment, leave out the 'of' or elaborate briefly?

·in Q10, 1st paragraph, 'such as on individual web pages for resource' should be 'a resource'?

·in Q11, 2nd paragraph, does '(see (Christian Bizer et al. 2009) <http://www.w3.org/2001/sw/hcls/notes/hcls-rdf-guide/#refs> for further details)' need the outer parentheses?

·in Q11, Figure 2 caption, 'DbPedia' should be 'DBPedia' (it is elsewhere)?

cheers,

michael

Michael Miller

Software Engineer

Institute for Systems Biology

*From:*M. Scott Marshall [mailto:mscottmarsh...@gmail.com <mailto:mscottmarsh...@gmail.com>]
*Sent:* Monday, November 26, 2012 7:53 AM
*To:* HCLS
*Cc:* Richard Boyce; Richard Boyce
*Subject:* [Linked Life Data] RDF Guide draft on W3C website

Hi All,

I cancelled the LLD task force teleconference due to lack of a pressing agenda. I would like to pick it up again next Monday.

We finally have an improved version of the RDF Guide W3C Interest Group Note in HTML at:

http://www.w3.org/2001/sw/hcls/notes/hcls-rdf-guide/

There might very well be "version creep" due to multiple editors and versions (journal article, corrections, improvements, updates) that were synchronized to some extent.

Please take a look at it send comments to Richard (CCd) and myself. Current plan is to talk about it next Monday, possibly moving to ratify and release.

I look forward to seeing some of you at the SWAT4LS events in the coming days in Paris:

http://www.w3.org/wiki/HCLS/SWAT4LS2012/Hackathon

http://www.swat4ls.org/workshops/paris2012/

Note that we are planning to support remote participation at Wednesday's hackathon so please contact me if you are interested and I will do my best to help you discover how to participate remotely.

Cheers,

Scott

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