Hi,

I just went through the WM ED and here are the things to do that I gathered (the list may not be exhaustive). Input and help is welcome, feel free to flag what you'd like to volunteer for.

- The Abstract needs to be rewritten, it's not entirely easy to understand what it describes.
  - The SotD need to be written (in preparation of FPWD).
- The active editors need to agree on what they'll use to edit/ generate the spec — I'm guess Anolis/Bert Bos. That'll give us a ToC.
  - The "Relevant Inputs" section needs to go.
- The Introduction is really only the first paragraph, and it needs to be expanded and have references. The rest are definitions which need their own subsection. - The table of window modes should be moved to the MQ section, and the descriptions merged. This places Conformance Requirements right after the Introduction (which is fine — it should be before anything normative). - A clarification of what is meant by "feature" would help. The "widget" mode is also referred to but lacks any description. - The scripting interfaces need some love to make them linked, and make sure they are proper WebIDL (notably they could use the implements keyword). They require a lot of documentation to be written. - I think that the MediaFeatureList could be a sequence<CSSStyleDeclaration> nowadays. - I forget the original reasoning: is it useful that the event initialisers have canBubbleArg and cancelableArg since presumably no matter what parameter is passed they won't bubble and won't be cancellable?
  - Acknowledgements need to be written.
  - References need to be written.
  - Some examples would be nice (but that's not needed for FPWD).

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