As an example, given this piece of doc: "render(renderer_name, value, request=None, package=None)"
As explanation would start with: "Using the renderer specified as ``renderer_name``...". I think this can be misleading at first to readers, as it was to me, that renderer_name is some special type of object, but is only a string. It is also overlong, and perhaps overly formal. There are other variations of this, e.g. "supplied as". I think it would be better to simply change such sentences to say: "Using the renderer ``renderer_name``..." This is how CPython documentation does it and should therefore not be strange to Python users. If this suggestion is acceptable, I will happily provide the patches. -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "pylons-devel" group. To view this discussion on the web visit https://groups.google.com/d/msg/pylons-devel/-/8jKHbNACxicJ. To post to this group, send email to pylons-devel@googlegroups.com. To unsubscribe from this group, send email to pylons-devel+unsubscr...@googlegroups.com. For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/pylons-devel?hl=en.
