FWIW, later in the month I plan to do some docs work, so any pull requests 
you can file would be great.

--Paul

On Monday, January 21, 2013 10:53:03 PM UTC-8, Tshepang Lekhonkhobe wrote:
>
> As an example, given this piece of doc:
>
> "render(renderer_name, value, request=None, package=None)"
>
> As explanation would start with:
>
> "Using the renderer specified as ``renderer_name``...".
>
> I think this can be misleading at first to readers, as it was to me, that 
> renderer_name is some special type of object, but is only a string. It is 
> also overlong, and perhaps overly formal.
> There are other variations of this, e.g. "supplied as". I think it would 
> be better to simply change such sentences to say:
>
> "Using the renderer ``renderer_name``..."
>
> This is how CPython documentation does it and should therefore not be 
> strange to Python users.
>
> If this suggestion is acceptable, I will happily provide the patches.
>
>
>
>

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